Turned up the colours on this one, so a bit extreme on the left, but still pretty accurate on the right. Strange effect.
Forgot to add. I wish we could show on this site the un-HDR processed photo as well as the HDR one on the same page, to show "before" and "after" work.
I like your comp but the colors are a bit strong for me personally. Many outside of HDR would love this though I might add.
YOu have a very different process. I like it. The variance in the sky from dark to light hurts the image.
While the colours are quite striking I agree they are oversaturated. I think some selective colour adjustments in Photoshop would be the way to go. There's uneveness in the sky which I know can often be a problem!