Excellent Family image....
A bit bright in spots, More contrast on basket of Fruit
This certainly proves that "HDR doesn't work with people" isn't always right. Beautiful shot and nicely processed.
a slight (3% ) desaturation on yellow and red (ihmo)
Looks great to me. Very natural look. I have never bought into the "HDR doesn't work on people" I think if done right you can have a very natural look and still enhance the rest of the photo
The faces of the two side girls look too wide for me.Something can be done to make it perfect.
10, a little leg movement, nothing more to add. Well done